Journal #6

I started my revision by reviewing what my reader had said to me. I took a lot of what she said and tried my best to improve the things she thought needed work. I started off by adding more dialogue and creating a better background to where the characters had come from. From there I improved my grammar and edited any misspellings that my partner had noticed in the first draft. The only thing I was having a problem with was including a good ending, I am not sure if I will leave the story open or conclude it. Other then these few problems my pastiche is coming along pretty well. I hope to revise this part a few times before a final draft.